Franlin+Mancebo


 * 1-"Poetry is they doorway to the soul" Floria**

I am not a poet,nor am I a person who was and still is brought up in the art of the langues of the soul.I am franklin, a loud and out there kid but at the same time I have a side that most people do not get to see because of my ways.In this side is where all of the poems,love stories ,and novels live.When I composed Ode to the broken hearts I was in this mind state. I went back to my old muse (witch is an old person who I hold very close to my heart).But, in the person I am is not and will not be the same person I was 2 days or 2years ago.The story is about a guy (who is not named) and his love life. It portrays the way he maneuvers through women as a fish would in water and make them fall for him and them he leave them In the dust with no remorse as he swims away to the next girl.


 * Memory poem **

**__The name of the store was Maritza Grocery__** **__I "worked" their most of my early life__** **__happiness__** **__was a thing of__** **__amazement.__** **__Because of my height I didn't have much say__** **__I was looked down upon by the elder__** **__as if I was a thing an object of amusement__** **__as if I a ball of yarn to a cat__** **__or a bone to a dog that has had a meal to last him the whole winter__** **__but I was uplifted by my peers__** **__Uplifted by the fact that one day I would to grow and a say__** **__A say as to what I could do and chose not to__** **__A say that even if it was not the loudest it would count__** **__Somebody would hee it and take it into consideration and would not__** **__and will not be silcened__** **__that gave me strength__** **__POWER__** **__SIZE__** **__and that made me feel__** **__GER-RR-RR-AAATE__**


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 * Ode to the broken hearts **

I love you you are so amazing. But...hey.... just because to people love each other it dosent mean we have to be together. im sorry I cant do this any more good-bye. HARSH hey key-key welcome to the pet shop i have a pet here you can adopt he comes with a leash,food and a cup of coffe with me OK  what would you like sir two small coffee's 1 cream and 2 sugar thank you hey this was fun we should do this again sometime hey i really like you i think your so amazing your like a flower in spring at its highest point i love you but ...Ummm this isn't... isn't going to work out im sorry........... Hey mama how you doing?? thats cool why are you here all alone well you can hang with us if you'd like. Great ill swig by at eight cool? ok. Months pass feelings burst heads clash and feelings are hurt but instead of going after he moved on..... and she still waits around for him to return We often look over what we should always be looking at......... BROKEN HEARTS

coments- +I like the idea that you pick +i like that you used the .... a lot i think it help see how you should read it +i liked the way you wrote BROKEN HEARTS ?what is the pet shop part there for ?this seems out of order ?i dont know if you part with the coffee shop is a date or what. try to make that clear

**Found poem** __1-Are you still collecting?__ __2-Even better write what she said?__ __3-After the storm has passed the sun still comes around to shine__ __4-The darker the sky is the more they shine__ __5-Don't hurt my heart anymore?-__ __6-I don't have 9 lives like a cat-__ __7-I have no bad intenions-__ __8-Im not a toy of your pleasure-__ __9-Don't treat me like a lost child with no direction-__ __10-I'll stay with you even if its not allowed__

__Don't treat me like a lost child with no direction__ __I have no bad intenions__ __Don't hurt my heart anymore?__ __I don't have 9 lives like a cat__ __Im not a toy of your pleasure__ __Are you still collecting?__

**"I Was Raised by..."** I was raised by the POP the BANG that RAT-TAT-TAT-TAT that runs threw my blood that runs threw the streets as cars do when its time to go it taught me to have a nice intro to any situation and then let it all out at the drop give it you all "dale dale" you can do it less go papa you can do it.

MY Poet is LIL B the BA$ED GOD

RIFF PEOM

"I see beauty in you" I see it when you open you eyes I see it when you cry I see it when you wail I see it when you dry I see it when you run i dont see it when you try to hide it with that fake facade of make up thats you i always want you to be my little honey-bun because i see beauty in you.